月之光影 -Moonlight Shadow-

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有時感慨自己真的寫文寫很慢。一個場景段落大約1000字，就要花一到兩個禮拜來寫。明明知道要寫什麼，也有大綱決定事件，但就還是寫很慢。

想了一下可能拖慢的因素：

  1. 一個場景得先定好時間地點，人物位置，該場景有什麼器物。
  2. 對話之間要穿插什麼動作，這點尤其卡最久，又還常常漏寫。
  3. 手寫草稿，但通常想到什麼寫什麼，語序都是亂的，沒辦法看。
  4. 謄進電子檔，做初步排序。但缺乏修飾，也常常缺乏重點描寫，放出去往往會被人認為是大綱文對話文。
  5. 整體陸續修飾補強一到兩輪。

寫一個段落到能夠放出來就已經修了三四次文句，可能就是主要的拖慢原因吧，但是不修又沒辦法讀。

放出來後過一段時間讓人看，又要再針對別人看不懂的地方調整修改，或是覺得缺少什麼表現又要再補，似乎就拖得更慢了。常常就是覺得心累又煎熬，除了感慨，似乎也沒能怎麼辦。

因為我直接想像畫面好像有障礙，所以沒辦法在腦中想像畫面或者演動畫電影分鏡去架構。

嘗試想了想其他方法：

  1. 觀看角度從主角出發，看對方表現，然後主角做出反應。
  2. 兩人分別是什麼心態，搭配什麼動作和表情。
  3. 拆解出需要什麼眼睛表情、手部動作、搭配道具、動作象徵、心聲出現時機。
  4. 時間軸列表呈現。

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¡Hola a todos! Me llamo Jinny, soy de Taiwan y estoy principiante aprendiendo español. Estoy aprendiendo a escribir en español. Es muy difícil para mí.

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